My+Poem

Beauty Is Difficult
Beauty is Difficult- For People all around- A struggle to keep and hard to maintain But easy can It be found. Found can It be in Nature- Found It can be in Man- It can be found in everything-- The smallest- Grain of Sand Beauty affects the mind Does also affect the Soul- Beauty can change a Person’s view On Life as a whole.

My poem is about beauty. So many people in this world today think that beauty is related more to sexuality than anything else. The first three lines describe the wrong way people look at besuty. But this way is not true. You can see beauty in everything around you if you just take a look around at even some of the simplest things. Even in the tiniest blade of grass or a little daisy popping up out of the ground at the beginning of spring is a sign of beauty. My poem is basically about looking past our society's definition of beauty and looking at a more realistic way of looking at beauty through nature and our own personal self. Good looks can make you beautiful, sure, but its what's inside your heart that makes beauty really what it is. 1204073671

An icon of perfection, Cast upon my wall, I strive to reach my everlasting goals-- until the very day I fall.

Why should I live as a copy, Of what's already been done When I can prove myself as me, And show I have really won. Take these wise words-- Desire is the drug of life, not pot, meth or skill, -- Desire breaks most sight.

My dreams of this perfection, Will soon come crashing down, Might not see me as a princess-- Yet I’m nothing without my crown.

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Saw a Creature- Scale a Wall. With many Legs- Eight legs all. Snuck Quietly- Clutched a Shoe- Swung it, Through and Through. The Spider was- No more Alive Scrape It up- No more to Live. my poem is about a spider who goes through a tough day. he is climbing the wall and i see him so i sneak to get a shoe. Then i swung and the spider died, which led to me scraping it up because it was gooey like all spiders.

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Saw a creature- Sacale a wall With many legs- Eight in all

Cluched a shoe I swoung through Shoe stopped wall Eight legs flew

Sat back down In my home Grabbed a pen And wrote poem

I like my poem though it is very pointless it really reminds me of emily dickinsons poems. Everything about the poem really from the 4343 in each stanza to the wierd ending were the poem talks about its very own creation. 1203992748

I want to comment about the first poem on this page (Beauty is Difficult) because I believe that in the world today looks is such a common topic in the world today. There are so many types of beauty. Whether its the beauty of nature, the beauty of God and religion, the beauty of friendship, the beauty of love, the phsyical attraction to beauty (whether of the sould or phsyical features), etc.

Beauty effects our attraction to many different things. It could attract you to a person. Whether they have a beautiful soul, a beautiful sense of humor, a beautiful mind, or their physical beauty. I believe all these beauties can go hand in hand with each other when looking for a friend or a mate. Sometimes you are attracted to a person because they are funny, smart, or pretty/handsome. But when you are attracted to someone by one of those traits, you might in time find that their personality or smarts make them a better looking person and more attractive.

I am ubsessed with the beauty found in nature. I love just taking in sceneries or taking pictures of things i exxperience in nature so i can have that time to look back on and feel a slight amount of the emotions i felt when looking at the nature scene. I find almost everything in nature beautiful. I love watching sunsets until they fade, i love watching thunderstorms and falling asleep to the soothing sound the raindrops make on my window, i love to examine the chainging of leaves from green to wonderful colors of fall and then feeling the dried up leaves crunch beneath my shoe, i love to snorkel and discover the beautiful world so rarely seen underwater, i love to ski and wakeboard on a calm, slick, unbroken by waves lake and i love the sound a feeling of the water just sliding underneath me, i love the beauty of rainbows and trying to look as far to the end of it but always being pleasantly disappointed by not being able to see the end (leaving room for imagination), i love to bask in a beautiful cloudless sky with only a bright sun to bronze my skin, etc.

I love beauty and every aspect of it. It is what makes your heart fall in love with something. 1204087939

In this post i want to comment on the second poem on this page starting with the line "An icon of perfection." I believe that this poem is trying to describe a young person's dream to become as good as their idol (like a poster of a hero on their wall). I believe that this strive for perfection is what everyone needs to become what they want to be in life. If you really want something, you can do it. I believe anything is possible when you practice and try your hardest to work towards your goal of becoming what you want to be. I follow a motto that bascially states that you should do your best and try your hardest and if you do, you will succeed. You also have to have the confidence that you will be victorious if you want something that bad. A quote that plays a role almost everday in my life is something that my coach tells my fellow teammates and i. He says, "Expect success, but always be prepared." This means you have to be confident and know your the best to be the best. You have to be confident, but always expect the unexpected curveballs that WILL ALWAYS! be thrown at you. Something will always get in the way of your goal, but if you keep focused and always kepp your eye on the prize, you will win! Have a sense of pride and confidence in yourself that you are amazing at what you do. It is a sort of cockiness that's inside, but not arrogant. When you know your good, you will be good. Success is as much mental as it is physical. Scientific studies have shown that if you don't convince yourself that you can do something, then you phsyically won't be able to do it.

Drive and determination give you an incredable amount of adrenaline to reach that final goal. The sweetest thing and the best thrill in life is getting what you want and finally recieving your prize after you've worked so intensively hard is such an outstanding feeling, its indescribable.

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