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 * What Parents don’t get about Partying**

The one thing that really grinds my gears is how adults don’t get why I like to party.

I like to party because were going to be in high school only once and we have to make the best out of it.

Now I know we have to limit are partying but I know for a fact that my parents partied and there parents didn’t like that they party.

My parents as teenagers thought it was stupid of there parents that they wouldn’t let them.

Now why would you tell us not to party when they hated it when there parent didn’t want them to party.

There being Hypocrites and there is nothing more that I hate more than hypocrites. ¶ I’m in high school they should trust me that I wont over party.

I’m just kidding there’s no such thing as over partying.

I will be responsible about my partying.

The main reason I party is so that I can hang with my friends and to have fun.

I just don’t understand that they block off all the fun I want to have. ¶ Two reason why my parents should let me party more.

One so I can spend some quality time with my friends.

Two so that I wont look like a non partier and trust me you don’t want to be a non partier.

Now these are probably the most important things about high school behind getting good grades and going to college.

This can also prep you for college.

One if your spending time with your friends so when come college times you wont be shy and meet people easier, and if you can last a long time partying that will help you for the endurance of your partyness portion of college. ¶ Now everyone has to no there limits on partying because you should no family and school does come first.

Also you have to be responsible at parties and make good choices, “I know I do”.

You also have to realize that if your parting at someone’s house you have to take care of there house.

There is always that one person that is very disrespectful to someone’s house and they destroy it. To be honest no one likes that person so party but responsibly. ¶


 * I recommend that you be clearer about what you mean by "party." Also, I don't see a three-element thesis statement in your first paragraph. That might help you to say more solid things in your later paragraphs.You kind of repeat the same ideas throughout the essay.**1205238481