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“You’re grounded!” Normally the first words out of a parent’s mouth after a long day playing Xbox, surfing the net, or texting your “BFF.” Where on earth did our parents become so clueless to today’s technology? They do not realize that doing things like surfing the net and playing video games can help us throughout life. We can become more knowledgeable with computers, be able to understand technology, and maybe even connect it to our future jobs. The technology of today’s teens (us) is highly misunderstood by parents, here S why. (S needs to be changed to is- 1205090398) We will be able to understand technological ways of speaking. There are so many terms and such that the world of technology uses. The words sometimes make little or no sense, but after you set up your Xbox or computer, you quickly learn some of that language. For example; I had no idea what a USB cable was until I had problems with my Xbox Live and I had to get a new router. The guy asked me if I knew what it was and I gave a blank face. I now know what a USB cable is because of Xbox and I have been able to help fix my sister’s camera and my printer because of it. After my time surfing the net and working with videogames I have learned many terms like USB, router, Ethernet, T1 line, and a lot more which I know will be helpful in the long run.

I think that you may need to check your sentences to add a bit more explanation and more info because its kind of weak. Good topic 1205013534hre 1204765709

its good but your missing some paragraphs i think lol but good strong first paragraph i like it 1205090398