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__What Adults Don't Get About Teenagers Life Today.__

Sometimes adults get on my nerves. They think life today and life back when they were kids is exactly the same. It shows in all adults but I notice parents acting like it mostly. Parents think they know everything about peer pressure, they dont know the differences between now and then, and school and social life has changed.


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Sometimes adults get on my nerves. They think life today and life back when they were kids is exactly the same. It shows in all adults but I notice parents acting like it mostly. Day in and day out parents think they know everything about teenagers life today, but they dont. There are somethings parents need to know about peer pressure, about the differences between now and then, and about school.

Parents have a hard time understanding peer pressure. They have a hard time understanding its severeness. Everyday teens are surrounded with loads of pressure. Everything we do has a little peers pressure. It's harder and more serious then what parents think. They think it's no big deal and it doesn't effect us, when really it a huge deal and effects all of our decicions. It can be the reason that our attitude is so good of bad. They just assume that were being a brat for no reason when they don't even take time to understand our feelings or what has happened during the day. Peer pressure can make us so sad, upset, happy and can even get us in big trouble. Peer pressure and the affect of it brings so many emotions to us and parents font realize it. It's alot stronger then they think. It also plays a bigger role in teens life then they think.

Life now and life when parents were teenagers has changed drastically. Everything is different and parents and adults just don't seem to comprehend that. Technology is way different. We rely on it more then they did when they were younger. Its how we communicate, like texting and IMing. Technoloy itself isn't so important but what we do with it is. Clothing is way different which i dont think adullts are getting used yet or just dont want to. Teenages are doing differnt things then what teenagers used to do. Theres more parties and more hangout places. If parents realized all of the places and what there like theyd probably be more greatful when there teen isn't out there and partying. Music may be louder and different but its what is out and what everyone likes. The music isn't as bad as adultss think, but yet again adults don't try to listen to it and understand it. Also, priorities for teenagers now is alot different. Sports and extra curricular activities are very important in our life. Their our escape from life and make us happy. Activities is what we lean on when something might not be going great. We love them. Culture has changed. They don't empathize everything we do, like, need, or enjoy.

Parents also need to understand teenagers school today. Teachers expect alot out of us today and we try our hardest to give back to them. Everyday we sit through six classes. Not only do we sit through them but we work 57 minutes straight during them. When we go home we have an average of five classes to either study or work on homework with. Our subjects are harder and more complex. ANother thing our parents dont realize about us and school is how hard we actually do try. We spend mornings in the library, skip lunches to study and spend car ride getting a head start on homework. When we get home we have our parents pound on us how we 'dont care' and 'dont try as hard as we should'. The truth is, we try as hard as we can and it hurts our feeling when our parents say we dont or they cant see it.

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P1 Sometimes adults get on my nerves.

They think life today and life back when they were kids is exactly the same.

It shows in all adults but I notice parents acting like it mostly.

Day in and day out parents think they know everything about teenager’s life today, but they don’t.

There are something’s parents need to know about peer pressure, about the differences between now and then, and about school.

P2 Parents have a hard time understanding peer pressure.

They have a hard time understanding its sereneness.

Everyday teens are surrounded with loads of pressure.

Everything we do has a little peer pressure.

It's harder and more serious then what parents think.

They think it's no big deal and it doesn't effect us, when really it a huge deal and effects all of our decisions.

It can be the reason that our attitude is so good of bad.

They just assume that were being a brat for no reason when they don't even take time to understand our feelings or what has happened during the day.

Peer pressure can make us so sad, upset, and happy and can even get us in big trouble.

Peer pressure and the affect of it brings so many emotions to us and parents font realize it.

It's a lot stronger then they think.

It also plays a bigger role in teen’s life then they think.

P3 Life now and life when parents were teenagers has changed drastically.

Everything is different and parents and adults just don't seem to comprehend that.

Technology is way different.

We rely on it more then they did when they were younger.

Its how we communicate, like texting and IMing.

Technology itself isn't so important but what we do with it is.

Clothing is way different which I don’t think adults are getting used yet or just don’t want to.

Teenagers are doing different things then what teenagers used to do.

There are more parties and more hangout places.

If parents realized all of the places and what there like they’d probably be more grateful when there teen isn't out there and partying.

Music may be louder and different but its what is out and what everyone likes.

The music isn't as bad as adults think, but yet again adults don't try to listen to it and understand it.

Also, priorities for teenagers now are a lot different.

Sports and extra curricular activities are very important in our life.

There our escape from life and make us happy.

Activities are what we lean on when something might not be going great.

We love them.

Culture has changed.

They don't empathize everything we do, like, need, or enjoy.

P4 Parents also need to understand teenager’s school today.

Teachers expect a lot out of us today and we try our hardest to give back to them.

Everyday we sit through six classes.

Not only do we sit through them but we work 57 minutes straight during them.

When we go home we have an average of five classes to either study or work on homework with.

Our subjects are harder and more complex.

Another thing our parents don’t realize about us and school is how hard we actually do try.

We spend mornings in the library, skip lunches to study and spend car ride getting a head start on homework.

When we get home we have our parents pound on us how we 'don’t care' and 'don’t try as hard as we should'.

The truth is, we try as hard as we can and it hurts our feeling when our parents say we don’t or they cant see it.

P5 Though parents and teens don't always see eye to eye, most of the time they respect eachother and their thoughts.

As the Ohio State University Family and Consumer Sciences states about teens "They care about their parents' opinion of them and hold their parents' opinions in high regard".

All teens want if for their parents to do the same.

Thought the opinions of the parents are respected, they still need learn and understand peer pressure, about the differences between now and then, and about school.

Once adults comprehend those then teens will talk to them more about their life and those situations.


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