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Michael Burt Intro Paragraph =Why Adults don’t understand Students doing Homework in their own Time= I don’t know why adults make a big deal out of this, but they want to make sure their child (ren) finishes any necessary homework that is assigned for the weekend first.

This wouldn’t be necessary as long as students have a planned schedule to finish on their own time.

This rule as adults say, could also impact children’s social lives with friends.

There could be some lifetime opportunities that children, or even I, could miss out on.

What adults do not understand is students have schedules to make their time adjustable, it can break frienships between people and ruin special opportunities that people won't get to experience
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P Children wish to make a planned schedule they feel they can deal with.

However parents have to know almost everything when it comes to academic work.

Parents and children should compromise a schedule that they both can agree on.

Every time when I have homework assigned on a Friday, my mom would want me to finish it all that following night.

I feel pressured and under control.

My mom doesn’t understand, when I have very little homework to do, I like to do it the next day so I have Friday night to relax.

Planning ahead is also another issue. Students want to plan ahead, so their plans can be prevented from changing.

But as long children live under their parents’ roof, they can be changed no matter how crucial the plans are.

P Students are most likely to arrange plans to hang out with friends, when they have little amount of homework to finish over the weekend.

Children get very anxious to hang out with their friends.

After that happens, their parents will barge into their rooms and they’ll say something like, “You can’t go because you have a project to do.”

This is necessary to listen to if students are behind on their work.

But in this case, if students are all caught up and down to an assignment or two, it’s ok to take a chill pill and do what they want to do because they deserve it for all their hard work.

Also when friends make promises to each other that the other friend will visit their house, they don’t because they had to do homework.

They'll feel like thieir friend let him/her down.It's essential to keep a relationship going strong, while having to deal with the consequences of homework.
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P The most exciting thing that can happen to students, including everyone else, is a celebrity visiting a town.

It can be a comedian, an athlete, an author and T.V. or movie stars.

It’s vital for children not missing on a once in a lifetime chance.

Parents know how crucial it is for their children to not miss out getting an autograph or a picture with a celebrity.

Although, the adults number one priority is to make sure their child (ren) can get the education they need to go to college without distractions.

This is part of the reason why children despise homework.It interferes in students’ lives.

Also when students get invited to parties, while having homework to finish, parents immediately take action and stop them to a complete halt. They’ll say something like, “You’re not going anywhere until finish your homework.”

Children would feel confined into an isolated room, with nothing but a desk, books and notebooks.

It drives them and me crazy.

P As I was saying, adults do not understand why children would rather finish homework on their own time.

I still believe that if students don’t have a lot of homework to do, they could be doing fun things instead, like seeing a movie or going to a friend’s house.

Otherwise, you might as well just mope around while doing homework, loathing about how great it would be to be on the outside world and do whatever you want.

If children can reason or compromise a schedule with their parents on when to do homework, then parents wouldn’t be so rough on their children.

Parents need to realize that everybody needs to have time for friends.

Without friends, children would be lonely.

Finally, parents need to know that they have to make sure children can experience exciting events.

I’m not saying students should procrastinate, but kids just need to be kids. Homework is important, but it shouldn’t control students’ lives.