Essay

__Parents Don’t Get Endless Nights__ Have you ever had your parents tell you right before you went out on a weekend that you need to have certain time you have to be home at? I think we all have had that happen. Parents just don’t get endless nights, and teenagers like myself don’t understand the point of a curfew. What point does a curfew mean to kids these days, is curfew a good thing, what point does curfew serve? These are questions that are asked to teenagers by teenagers to their parents every weekend night. I think you need to find a more exact subject than "Endless nights" try "how stupid curfew is" mme.** According to Mike Hardcastle curfews are not an effort by your parents to control or ruin your fun. I can tell you this much, I hate curfews and they do ruin my night. My parents think that this whole curfew helps me respect the rules of the city that they laid down for teenagers. My parents say it is a privilege to go out and it is my responsibility to be home on time. My insight on this is that it makes me seem like a looser. There are kids staying out till one o’clock and I have to be home at eleven. **In the first sentence there should be a comma after Hardcastle and I think you're supposed to put what he said in quotations. KCa** Then of course I propose the question if you trust me so much why do I have to be home at eleven? According to my parents it is a family courtesy that they abide by. Family courtesy, what is that? My parents say there doing something good for the community to not keep a crazy teen out to late. They always say to be responsible to and a curfew is always an excuse to get out of a sticky situation. My mom’s main reason that she believes in curfews is that if I’m not home at a certain time she calls the police and tells them that there fifteen year old son is not home yet. Curfews are very embarrassing to me. I have had several friends drop me off at eleven and they have gone back out. I find that very insulting because there parents trust them. Then I ask my parents why can’t I do that. You know what there answer is, it’s because its for your own good. **Put what your parents say in quotations. KCa** What! For my own good that doesn’t make any sense that’s like a child asking for candy and there parents say no and they ask why and then the parents say because I said so. It doesn’t make any sense. I find it very shameful and almost if someone spit in my face. **I think you need stronger sentences than, "It doesn't make any sense." KCa You need to make more sense, your having an argument with yourself. MMe**
 * you have good ideas but i cant really point out our thesis, maybe you should change it and make your arguments a little more clear in your opening paragraph.1205199197