What+Adults+don't+get+about+School

Adults don’t get many things when it comes to tens. One of those things is school. School is different than it used to be. There are more rules, more pressure, and more responsibilities. P In schools these days there are more rules that you are expected to follow. Kids can’t just go wild and do whatever they want when they want. I have talked to my dad and he tells me that there never used to be so many rules to follow. I don't think this is fair. P Pressure, is the toughest thing to deal with in high school. Grades are all that matters, and it is overwhelming to keep a good GPA. I get about an hour or more of homework every night. Most students also partake in extra-curricular activities which can conflict with our unregimented time. P The average teenager’s life has a lot of major responsibilities that can cause stress; some of these may not even be related to school. Next year I know that I will have a job, and I bet that most juniors and seniors have jobs to pay for gas, insurance, and any spending money they need. With the high gas prices now it can be hard for a teenager to pay all that money. Adults only had to pay a few cents back when they were teenagers. P In conclusion, there is no way that adults can get school like we do. Everything is different now than it was. There are more rules than ever before; pressure is the hardest part of being a teenager. Plus, the responsibilities that an average teenager has to be a part of can be overwhelming. But we must still push on because these are the most important years of our live. This is what decides our future.

You make some good points in your essay but I think you need to work a little on your first paragraph. 1205200783

i agree with dte you need to work on your thesis paragraph 1205281292