Mine+and+Katie's+Poem

This was the poem that I wrote with Katie:

I looked outside my window Saw then standing there Short white poofy tails Blowing in the air

Eating seeds off the ground Walking through the trees Grazing for fallen leaves Mingling with the bees

As if in fear Ears pull back The doe eyes looked Frantic and black

They froze and stood Here they stay No sound was made Then ran away

This poem that I wrote with Katie follows the style of Emily Dickinson because it follows a rhyme scheme it also has exact rhyme and slant rhyme for every second and forth line. 1205365566

yah this poem that Kathryn and i wrote also has the doubble meaning words like doe that make it confusing to tell what it is you are reading about.and as kathryn said we fallowed the 43434..... rhyme scheme and had the slant ryme in the fourth stanza with the words stay and away/ 1205449540