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Joey Pullano Br. Tom 3/4/08 Introductory Paragraph Out of everyone in our world, teenagers need the most freedom. __MOST__ teens feel and really know they are responsible and reliable enough to be able to go out every weekend with their friends or maybe catch dinner with a friend during a weeknight after homework.

. That is the kind of freedom teenagers crave, and some get it, but not enough. Some teenagers don't deserve that freedom because of the choices they've made in the past that they're parents think they are bound to make again in the future, which is extremely fair.

However, the kids that are respecting their peers, don’t do drugs or alcohol, and basically don’t get into any mischief whatsoever should be allowed some freedom.

Freedom can be whatever they want it to be, it can be having friends over and asking your parents to not bug you, it could be going to see a comical movie with Brian and Mike every Saturday night.

What adults dont get about teenage freedom is that we usually want to go out both friday and saturday night, we want to stay out till the curfew of the town, not the parent's own curfew, and we need alone time as well. P 1204676409 - BETTER??

All teenagers need to get away on the weekend. We spend Monday through Friday busting our brains studying and doing massive amounts of homework. We are physically and mentally drained by the middle of the school week. Lots of kids play sports, which for certain one's are beginning to be year round. All that drains a teenager and adults wonder why we need to go out every weekend? That’s why! Teens should be allowed this freedom because we are more responsible than adults believe. What adults don't get about teens going out on weekends and hanging out with their friends is that the responsible one's aren't doing anything wrong, which is usually an adult's main concern when their child leaves the house. I and a big percent of the teenagers in America want nothing but a good time to relax away from the pressures of school, sports, and regrettably, listening to our parents. P

Besides the fact of wanting to go out every weekend, we deserve alone time on weekdays or when we can't find plans for the weekend. Most kids love the company of their parents, but only a certain amount. Teenagers sometimes just like to lock themselves in their room and listen to music all night or watch a movie, etc. What Adults don't get is they think when we do that we just hate the world, or hate them, or never want to talk to them again. That is certainly not the reason. If Adults took the time to think about when they want to go on a vacation without us teenagers or younger kids, that is truly the same concept of us wanting alone time in our room, except we don't have the same abilities to do things Adults can obviously do. With that said give us our alone time, everyone needs it and maybe teenagers do more because of the stress put on us. P


 * You have a lot going on here, but I don't see a three-element thesis statement. Do you?**1204678454

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 * I concured with Br. Tom's statement, then after reading what you changed I would say that your thesis statement was very strong, and definitely made the reader think about the same situations with themselves**