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In the life of a teenager, much of the interactions and social classes are based on self image.

However, adults don't seem to level with teens and treat and treat self image as the powerful force it is. Take out one 'and treat'. You have that phrase twice. 1205111222 Adults deep insisting that a new found maturity level will overcome this idea of self image but what adults can't seem to wrap their minds around is the importance of this idea in the present state of mind for teenagers. change deep to keep.1205111222 Also, adults tend to neglect what effects a teens' self image can have on them in the future.
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It's not so much that parents/adults have no idea what self image is, it's more that their opinion of it strays from that of the younger generations'. Adults simply seem to not care and with knowledge that they themselves are older from when they were the age of a teenager and do not care about self image; they assume that teenagers will not care in their old age. //**This entire sentence doesn't make much sense; I have no idea what you're trying to say.**// 1205284954 This concept, even if it is true, is where the disagreement and confusion begin.
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Adults seem to have this strange faith that other issues and principles will set in that will overshadow an obsession with self image that their teen might have.

Adults just view self image as the petty vanity of a young child. P
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What parents neglect to acknowledge are the effects on the present state of mind that a self image has. The world today that teenagers live in is completely different to that of the previous generations' world. Since times change, naturally, how people act and what is important changes too. Adults continue to neglect what is personally cared about by teenagers and then complain that they don't "understand" their teenager or that their teen is too "difficult" to deal with when the real problem lies with them.
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If adults would simply level with teenagers on a few major issues such as self image, then maybe they might have a more pleasant and fulfilling parenting experience.

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Adults in general do not acknowledge the causes of a negative self image and the effects that it can have on a persons emotions and day to day life.

First off, is embarrassment.

Embarrassment is an old story from long ago that adults do not take too seriously anymore.

Embarrassing their children at public events, it still has an impact on the emotional state and personal self image of the child that has been explained as a big deal.

How the teen lives their life can also have an effect on their adult life later on. Causes for a negative self image include what a person wears mainly, and also their hair style and what kind of situation they find themselves in at home. The activities a teen must attend in order to maintain their self image also is severely important.
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Adults just don't care. P
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Altogether, adults just do not understand the issue of self image.

They insist that we as teens will grow out of a need for self image, and so they cannot comprehend the present state of mind, adults tend to neglect what contributes to self image, and also adults complain on why they do not get along with their teen when the teen is only dealing with life and pressure of keeping up a positive self image.

Adults just do not understand.
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