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What Adults Don't Know About Video Games
I am a huge video game fanatic, but my parents do not seem to understand why I enjoy them so much.

I am constantly checking the Internet for information regarding upcoming or already released video games.

I also spend a several hours each week playing them. When it comes to video games, I am usually pretty knowledgeable.

Adults do not understand why video games are always entertaining kids and teenagers.

Adults do not see how the different consoles for playing the video games on, several genres of games to play, and different ways to play the games with your friends seem to entertain kids and teens for hours on end.

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First off, the different consoles that are available for playing video games include a variety of features that entertain us.

There are currently three different consoles available in stores now: the Nintendo Wii, the Sony Playstation 3, and the Microsoft Xbox 360.

Each one is entertaining in its own way.

The Nintendo Wii has Internet capabilities that are used in everything from voting in polls to downloading classic Nintendo games from the 1980’s and 90’s, it also has motion-sensing controllers that are used in a variety of ways, and wifi capabilities, which allow you to play some select video games over the Internet.

The Sony Playstation 3 has similar Internet capabilities to the Wii, but with less limitation.

The Microsoft Xbox 360 has virtually the same Internet capabilities as the Playstation 3, but focus mainly on the multiplayer aspect of it.

Most adults seem to think that the same thing can be done on the computer.

This is true that the Internet is on the computer, but sometimes someone else in your family is on the computer and you need another way of using the Internet.

That is where the video game consoles come in.

They allow a person to use the Internet from the comfort of the couch. P
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There are many different genres of video games that keep kids and teens entertained as well.

Some of the most popular games are shooter games.

This involves the player controlling their character and shooting enemies to progress through the game.

Another popular genre of video games is sports. Sports games range form racing to baseball games and usually are fun to play with friends.

Other genres of video games include adventure, puzzle, role-playing games (RPG), and fighting games.

Adults seem to have trouble understanding how the games entertain us when each console focuses on one genre of games with few games from other genres.

The Xbox 360, for example, focuses mostly on shooter games while the Playstation 3 focuses mainly on sports games.

The Wii on the other hand, does not focus on one particular genre, but instead offers a variety of games.

What adults do not understand is that different people prefer different genres of games.

For example, I like adventure games as well as games that heavily involved multiplayer.

The different genres of games are what help make video games so fun because no one prefers the same types of games as somebody else.

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In my opinion, the best aspect of any video game is the multiplayer aspect.

Adults do not seem to get why this is so fun for people.

First off, when you have your friends over at your house to play video games, it is always gratifying to completely screw up your friends.

Knowing that your actions will probably mean victory for you id a feeling that just never gets old. Online play is just as fun as having friends over to play video games as well.
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Screwing up complete strangers over the Internet is just as gratifying as screwing up your friends.

When it comes to multiplayer, screwing people up is only half the fun.

Some video games also include co-op play in which two or more players team up in and play through the one player mode together.

This is fun because you and your friend always have loads of fun defeating AI (artificial intelligence) enemies.

However, in co-op play, teamwork is necessary in order to progress through the game.

You and your friend have to work together while having a great time doing do together. Adults do not seem to understand that whenever you play video games with or against friends, you always seem to have twice as much fun as you would have by playing single player mode.
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With all of the things that go into video games, it is impossible to see how adults do not understand why video games are so fun for kids and teens.

The different consoles for, the different genres of, and different types of multiplayer modes in video games should easily show adults why video games are so entertaining.

Each video game is entertaining in its own way.

For example, this weekend I am planning to purchase //Super Smash Bros. Brawl// for the Nintendo Wii.

This game is the third in its series, and I really like the first two games.

From what I have read online, is supposed to be the best installment of the series so far, so I cannot wait until I get it. I love playing video games because they are fun and can always entertain me for hours on end.
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It puzzles me how my parents cannot see this, but I do no mind too much, because video games will always provide me with hours of fun.
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 * A pretty good first draft, but where are the Adults? Shouldn't you have some reference to their not understanding in both your hook and in your thesis?**1204678805